Group Crit

contFrom the crit I realized I have a lot to do and fix . I had very good feed back about my block and how organised it is but there also a few issues that need to be fix.

1. The title of the book. Re think about the name should it be a long line of is less is more, or being really bold with the words.

2. Pages look too the same and is boring half way through. Makes it more interesting using different layouts even colour.

3.Compare other design which is really layered basically what is not simple design.

4. Needs to be analytical.

Over all a productive crit but need to look at how to make a lot more interesting . Trying to mix it up with more play with layout. Maybe having larger quotes as making them more important and title need improving.